Today for reading I created a wordle. If you ask what this is, it a turns a story into mixed up words. I created one about Bobby (he is not real and is not a real person but a lot of people are aimed Bobby). He had a rough day and this wordle is describing what is happening. The story will be at the bottom of the wordle.
Bobby glances out of his window turning more pale by the second. He watches as rubbish glides across the wet road and past the empty paths. Bobby turns towards his bed and wraps himself in his blanket. He looks depressed after what has happened today in his life. He's petrified and scared but determined to make it through the night. He might be able to slumber through the bright sunny day. His eyes start to close inch by inch, Bobby tries to stay up longer until his eyes close shut and he starts to sleep. He awakens in the morning ready to start the day.
I like this task but I described the surroundings more than our friend Bobby here and I don't know if you were suppose to do a real person or make one up. I might have to do this again but I will post two blogs about this if I have to.
I hope you liked this blogpost. Make sure to go check out my classmates blogs and our class blogs links down below.
Room 7 Class Blog : Class mates blogs are linked in the class blog.
Kia ora Ocean
ReplyDeleteWow, what a descriptive and emotive piece! I like the personalisation you applied to this writing task by creating a fictional character while also listing their personality traits. I thought you also painted a clear picture of your character's mood and their environment. I love the how the last line leads to a more hopeful conclusion.
Did you find it easier to write about a fictional character?
What inspired you to write this description?
Huge thanks also for plugging your R7 classmates and class blog. I look forward to reading more of your writing.
Mr N
PS: Teacher edit for accurate spelling and grammar ONLY.