The Two Dragons
This week's writing task was a free verse poem about "The Two Dragons".We practiced using semi-colons,a range of sentence lengths and using better vocabulary.Our poems are based on an original poem written by gary O'Connell.I chose Dragons because I did a picture and it gave me an idea to write about dragons.
The Two Dragons
Their claws have a distinct silver like on a trophy of crystal.
Their backs with scales of snakes with the pure green of the grass.
Their legs were not there because their flying with grace.
Their breath is the element on their eye and colour of skin,fire and lightning.
Flying in peace watching all of the mortals on the beautiful surface of earth.
Surrounded by rocks of the deepest and darkest caves where no one goes.
Torches light up as they look at each other in rage as a mortal walked through.
Their spines charging up with the electricity of storms and flames of the underworld.
Whiskers alike and beards blown by gusts of wind for luck.
Cliffs fall down and spiked rocks fall on the dragons crushing them down.
Their teeth sharp inside their large mouths crushing the rocks falling on top of them.
Roars of death enough to scare the bravest man in the whole world.
Rays of their elements fighting to subdue on dragon friend or foe .
The mortal flees for his life and the two stopped and looked at destruction.
A truce was made from the gigantic dragons as all went well.
"Dad what happened next?""No one will know little one,no one will know."
I might had changed this into a story then a poem but it still is good.Right?
Hi Ocean
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you really enjoyed writing about this topic.
Avoid making posts in capital letters as this often implies you as the author are shouting. It also makes it a bit difficult to follow how good your ideas are.
Regards
Mr N
Hi Ocean I really liked your blog post because it is so creative and do you remember when we were drawing the story in class?
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Malachi